Crash!!

******I'm going to try a poem with no rhyme

1 hour and 30 minutes
That was not that long, ryt?
But Something came over me
A Cold Wind, Strikes
An Overflowing Chill,
It Creeps over me

Increasing Fatigue,
Growing Weakness,
Overhead Pain,
Lightheaded feelings,
There was just no end to
These Feeble feelings

I was soaring and tumbling
As my journey leads the way
My destination?? Unknown
My Strength slowly draining out of my body
I just sat there,, alone
Staring into a screen
Back Straight, and home clothes
my shirt? From a 5k run
my shorts? they're for sports
They were not enough protection
I continue my wait,, endless anticipation
Playing with my thumbs as I go
The Wait was long, and the ride,,
The ride felt longer,,
As my head bounced against the window,,
I lie there unconsciously,,
A dummy made of flesh
Shaking and Moving,,
Like an Empty Box
There were no jingles,,
There were none,,
For nothing was inside this being
A waste of Space

As I got home,, there!!
The bed was spotted
I slapped the fan silly
And turn its knobs
Its engines roared
A memento of a car
And then a Crash
Ambulances come and people yelling
Police Cars driving around
Should I call for help??
They're already here
I'll yell for help
I'll do it!! I'll find a way!!
I was hurt, injured, can't move my leg
I held it, It hurts
At least in my dreams ^.^

There we go people,, How is it?? This was about the time I waited in the Mall. The mall,, as cozy as it was for some people,, was not so enjoyable after practice. If you've read the poem correctly, I felt sick. I couldn't really think much. I hope you enjoyed it 0.<..... I'll wait for comments

Stories?

I have never really
Made a story before
That captured imagination
And was solid to the core

A story that I make
Wouldn't have much influence
It never covered all angles
As if the writer was very dense

I've never made a story
That ruptured someone's thinking
My stories are only interesting
In those three seconds between your blinking

Why now? Should I start
This complicated task
Would the spotlight give me attention?
A place to bask?

The prediction of the future
Tells me it might be bad
It IS made by me,
A more than normal lad

Oh well, we'll just see what happens
As I TRY to make this story
Hope it comes out well and productive and great
And never become boring